rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I would have liked to find out about the \"lesson book\". This section was not up to the same quality of the first, sorry to say. It is hard to write as you go. Do you have a complete outline of where your general story direction is leading. Something you and other male writers should have is a sexually experienced female that can check you for realism. If you wish to deviate from realism, it must have a mechanism to get you there. Even teenagers wear out unless some \"cause\" intervenes. Female experience and knowledge of their anatomy is helpful. Sorry to be so critical, but I figured you might want an objective but honest feedback. Keep up the good work and write more. Try a beta version to better your approach.

coooooool

Outstanding, really outstanding. I really look forward to the next chapters. Oh and btw, i posted it already in the first part, Ginny got brown eyes, read the chamber of secrets again mate.

::mists up:: so sweet! but tonks and snape? ewwwwww! sorry i guess its personal prefence... great fic! Hope to see more from you soon!

Woohoo!
I crown you the glorious king/queen? of smutfic!!!! Truly marvellous writing!!

umm i jsut reread the first instalment, and i was wondering if you were ever gong to explane what the present ron gave to hermonie for christmas was?

plz, Sara its a engagement ring
dont be so dents

plz write more i wanna know what she meant by her not deserving the ring or harry plz write more

I really loved the \'Bad Hermione \' and \' Good Hermione \'. That was really hot. I also loved the chapter with Snape and Tonks. He is so hot. I would let him cut my clothes off, and slap me around. Can\'t wait to see more from you, keep up the great work.