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okkk well that was....intresting. Draco\'s father giggling!?!?! And it\'s spelled Malfoy. It just seemed rush i mean harry was like \"you hate me\" and Draco just said nope and kissed him, Draco\'s parents excepted it way to fast, they all seemed out of character to me.

opps i forgot you were french so that explains the spelling mistakes so obviously that makes sense but it still semmed rushed and out of character a bit

Alo! ^-^
J\'ai ador

I agree with the other review that said the story seemed rushed. You need to take time and use more detail, but it was a good plot. There were several spelling/grammar mistakes, but overall you have very good English skills...I took 2 years of French and I don\'t even remember how to say \"Where is the bathroom?\" But then I\'m just a stupid American.