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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous. And beautiful. It's very rare to see something written with a bit more to it than sex here, but I loved the emotion behind it. Lovely!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story! I enjoyed it very much.
~Ami
~Ami
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it to pieces. i am just so enthralled with Severus and this is the bestest thing in the world. i want to be a sixteen year old sex slave to Severus Snape!
;)
;)
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutley fucking amazing story, Brilliant! *claps*
Rates you a five, please keep writing brill stories!! ^_^
Mouse ~xx~
Rates you a five, please keep writing brill stories!! ^_^
Mouse ~xx~
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely rounded out story. In your, Severes was such a gentleman. I was sorry that Harry died, but glad that Draco and Lucius died. Thanks.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good. pity its a one shot. you could have elaborated in so many different areas. Umm... I might have missed it, but when did DD leave the room when they started to have sex? Please tell me i missed it (dd? a voyeur?? GROT!)
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I love mush. <3
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading this, it was brilliant. Not a trace of tedious self insertion, but skilful and quality writing all the way Thank you for sharing.Do write more!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was really good. I was expecting a crappy Mary Sue fiction, and actually found something I loved. You made me cry! lol And that\'s usually a good thing, means it\'s a good story. It was very interesting to say the least. Definately enjoyed it. Hope there\'s another for that \"different story\". lol But yeah. Awesome job.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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::Jaw drops::
=O
WOW
Holy Cow!!
This is terrific! Amaising! Beautiful!
::Dies:: You truely have a gift for writing...in other words, that is my way of hinting that you need to write more ;)
This is...This was...WOW.
I can\'t even find words to describe the sheer BRILLIANCE of this!
::Jaw drops::
=O
WOW
Holy Cow!!
This is terrific! Amaising! Beautiful!
::Dies:: You truely have a gift for writing...in other words, that is my way of hinting that you need to write more ;)
This is...This was...WOW.
I can\'t even find words to describe the sheer BRILLIANCE of this!