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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Another chapter, please!!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!
This is quite intriguing. I can\'t wait to see how everything developes.
This is quite intriguing. I can\'t wait to see how everything developes.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yhe excitment!!! please update soon!!!!!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look forward to read more
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fic. I really like what you have so far. I just have one suggestion it would be cool if you could explain how much time has passed that Harry has been in Azkaban. I hope you post more soon.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more!!!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you always write the most amazing stories.. please update again soon... both fics.. please!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad keep going and update soon
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eek I really hope you keep writing this one. Only one chapter and you already have me hooked.
Tee hee!
I know you have other fics that you are working on but I hope that you\'\'ll keep writting this one.
Now I\'m demanding or anything of the sort I just really like this fic and encourage you to keep
writing so I can read more. Yep I know I\'m seflish.
-Mashell
Tee hee!
I know you have other fics that you are working on but I hope that you\'\'ll keep writting this one.
Now I\'m demanding or anything of the sort I just really like this fic and encourage you to keep
writing so I can read more. Yep I know I\'m seflish.
-Mashell
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry signed in relieve, his mind was finally clearing.
Shouldn\'t that be: sighed, not signed; relief, not relieve????
Dobby, please, not Dolby (we don\'t have surround-sound in the fics just yet)
a spy in the Dark Lords ranks. Change that to \"the Dark Lord\'s ranks\"
to fit the possessive tense.
Not too shabby of a story thus far. Just some grammatical errors and some spelling snafus. More?????
Shouldn\'t that be: sighed, not signed; relief, not relieve????
Dobby, please, not Dolby (we don\'t have surround-sound in the fics just yet)
a spy in the Dark Lords ranks. Change that to \"the Dark Lord\'s ranks\"
to fit the possessive tense.
Not too shabby of a story thus far. Just some grammatical errors and some spelling snafus. More?????