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for Trust and secrecy

by Sakya

person Sahira
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked it very much, hope there will be more soon:)
person Priss368
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! I was just thinking of you today! I wonder who is the real culprit? I wonder if his friends will feel badly about the way they treated him when it eventually comes out that he\'s innocent. Please update again soon! Priss
person Rebecca
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Get a beta reader! Or at least read over what you\'ve written and clean up the errors. I\'ve found that if an author doesn
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 3! What does Harry say/do when he\'s told the whole story? Maybe Draco can convince him to finally have his eyes fixed. How\'s the baby and his health? Please hurry with more!
person elecktra
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person me
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just thought you might want to know that you spelled the house-elf\'s name as \'Dolby\', but his actual name is \'Dobby\'.
person Brittany
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story already, i love stories where Draco\'s parents are nice (there are not very many out there) so i\'m glad i found this one, please update soon!!!!!
person cereal killer
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so great, i cant wait to read more!!!
person Ebony Cassandra
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it and you have to update soon
person dedmun
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude, this was a great first chapter. totally like what happened in this one. just one side note: the house elf harry freed is named \'dobby\', not dolby. post again super fast, can\'t wait to find out what happens next, and please rip the weasley\'s and gryffindor\'s a new one.