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I love your characterization of Bella, and I know it's been two years so you're probably not going to finish this, but I really wish you would. I love your descriptions of the scene and I really want to read more. This is in the threesomes category, and that scene would have been an interesting read, as would the scenes containing some of the warnings. Do you have favorite stories, stories that inspired this one, that I could read?

I like it and think you should continue with it. But that's just me.

You must write more, please, its awsome! any idea how long there will be till theres more?

Good story plz update soon

Please continue the story. I have a want to know what happens, how does he escape, friends reaction to his capture, does he save Snape, does he turn Bella? I need answers!

c\'mon update i am waiting impationtly what happens next

What book did you get your version of the prophesy from? Yours can be interpreted in vastly different ways than the original.

And I know you didn\'t go with it (and it would have either changed or shortened the story), but you had Voldie give a Wizard\'s Oath! Do you realize that that he spoke on behalf of all the Deatheater\'s actions? Theoretically, if the little girl\'s father had bolted for freedom and, say, Bellatrix crucio\'d him (a kneejerk reaction from a deatheater, doing so before she even consciously realized what she was doing), Voldemort could have had all his magic ripped from his body as a result of the oath - he\'d either be totally mortal again, a muggle or squib even, or the magics that gave him his body and kept his spirit around could have disappeared, killing him forever.

Hell, if Harry had bolted, it could even have been described as Voldie dying by Harry\'s hand.

wow keep posting

Well done. I am looking forward to the rest of the story.

I like it. im looking foward the next chapter