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Wow! A new chapter already - Yey!
I don\'t feel a need in a rape scene, but if you want it - o.k.
Get to the talking!!!! :-)

update update update!!! this is going to be good!!!!!!

Mmm, lovely chapter, and definantly a good girl in doing so. I enjoyed this chapter, much. I wish I could write as good as you. Maybe...lessons during free time? xD Much love.

good so far, please write more asap.

Point: Don\'t be afraid to use contractions. Say the dialogue out-loud to see if the cadence and rhythm flows.
Without contractions, language seems very stilted, and all your characters aren\'t Professors or Lucius Malfoy...

More!! Please more!!! really goodness!! Poor poor poor poor Draco I want to hold him and love him and make his pain go away... well maybe i wouldnt have myself take the pain away, that would be Harry\'s job, but i would definatly wanna see it. jk but yea up date soon please. I love this kinda draco thing you know? Lucius is a bad parent thats all there is to it. Maybe before Voldie came bach he was ok but not while Voldie is aoround he can\'t be. I just can\'t see that. Anyway update please please please.... I will make you some of my special home made cookies.
Lady X

If given a choice.... no rape scene. My imagination does plenty. Feel for Draco though. What happens when he sees the \"hello\"? Can\'t wait for chapter 3!

Very good! I\'m liking the story a lot. I\'m very interested in seeing what\'s going to happen, esp. when Harry realizes who this is happening to and when Draco realizes someone is listening...well reading. :) As for a rape scene...it could work. The process of writing and reading it may be benifical to the two...Draco would probably (imho) be more likly to write about it than talk to anyone and he would need to work through it...so it could work. As the writer though it is for you to decide. :) Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

I don\'t know if I need an actual rape scene, but maybe having Dragon write it in the diary...? Can\'t wait for H/D \"talking\" via Diary, & please tell me Ginny\'s not going to be stupidly evil and steal it or something? And you didn\'t answer my last question yet, but I\'m sure you will!!

I\'m reviewing. Does that mean you\'ll update soon? Because I want you to. Happy Writing.