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by BlackDragonHeart

person Missi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are very...glarey (is that a word?) today. Glaring at brothers and Kittens. Despite all of this, you wrote a good chapter. I can\'t wait for more!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco! (Thank you for not adding that scene!) Can\'t wait for chapter 4! When will they realize they have journals that are connected? Who really bought that other journal? Why send the present with no return address?
person Missi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And thank you very much for answering my other question!! I truly appreciate it. Now I can obsess on another question!!
person Alexa
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great but short chapter....
Please update soon and please make it longer.

Rape scene - well, I think I changed my mind - I wouldn\'t mind a rape scene. Espesially if it would make the chapter longer.
person neo
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
non-con scenes are wrong. please avoid it. i really like the concept so far.
person Autore
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why not write the rape scene, but separate it with a line or two of ********* WARNING RAPE SCENE******** so that anybody who doesn\'t want to read it can skip easily, and the rest of us sickos can? But more than the rape scene, I wanna see some Harry/Draco interaction! Come on! Lets get to the good stuff! More soon... VERY soon right? MOOOOOOOOORE!!
person sbkar
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEVER, NEVER apologize for not writing about a rape scene!!!!!!!!!!!!! Allusions to it are enough.
person MellonLegolas
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has a nice light tone to it but still shadows to some deeper more serious intentions. More please!!!!!
person Harle
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story so consider this the review for chapters one and two. I like the idea so far about the diary. Looking forward to see how they react to each other. I almost died laughing when I read about a gay Harry stealing Hermione\'s clothes.

Keep up the good work, can\'t wait to read more.
person shadowcat
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter I will be checking for it daily.
it it 6/6/05