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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you did an exceptional job on the dialogue, I enjoyed it very much! It was freaking hilarious! Hermione threw up on the Minister of Magic\'s shoes! LOL!!! That was freaking great! And they took Ginny\'s wand hee hee!!! I wonder how the hell they got her to give it up!!! I just can\'t see her handing it over!!! LOL!!! Once again another kick ass chapter and all the hard work on the dialogue definitly payed off!!! I am glad that you like my reviews *blushes*, I am just being honest. You are an exceptional writer and I feel very lucky to have found your stories! Also, thank you for your kind words and encouragement about my son, I really appreciated it so very much!
Blessed be,
Alauralen
Blessed be,
Alauralen
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the bantering here, it was as well written as the dialogue between Ginny and Hermione. At least every one will know now that Snape didn\'t kill any one. The Campbell\'s thermos was great! Neither of them even knew what it was! Stroke of genius! I love how you put humor in even the gravest of situations. I am a firm believer of angst with a dose of humor and you pull it off splendidly! I anxiously await your next chappie!! I love how Remus and Snape are becoming friends in spite of themselves!! And how happy Snape was that Ginny had believed him innocent instead of assuming his guilt! Absolutly fabulous! Keep up the good work!!
Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. i never would have thought of snape and ginny together, but it works so well. wonderful writing. cant wait to see what you have in store next!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry that I have not been reading more but life has been extremely hectic lately. I just read chapters 13 and 14. I must say kudos to you on the sex scene, it was exceptionally well written!!! I LOVED it!!!
I hope that Snape is okay!!! And they can\'t really believe that he actually had something to do with those peoples\' deaths!!! I am really enjoying the story and can\'t wait to get to the next chappie!!!
Tonks was very well written and exactly like she is in the book. Very well done!!! I like that Ron wanted to find Snape that in her apartment. LOL!!! Wonder what he would have done if he had walked in on them!!! I also liked the mirror lecturing Ginny in how to sleep and how she couldn\'t leave the room looking the way that she did!!! LOL!!! That was great!! Keep up the good work!!!
Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
I hope that Snape is okay!!! And they can\'t really believe that he actually had something to do with those peoples\' deaths!!! I am really enjoying the story and can\'t wait to get to the next chappie!!!
Tonks was very well written and exactly like she is in the book. Very well done!!! I like that Ron wanted to find Snape that in her apartment. LOL!!! Wonder what he would have done if he had walked in on them!!! I also liked the mirror lecturing Ginny in how to sleep and how she couldn\'t leave the room looking the way that she did!!! LOL!!! That was great!! Keep up the good work!!!
Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, Snape wanted for murder, that can\'t be right. Please tell me a trick
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ginny: \"Sure Ron. I have the evidence right here in my pants!. And I enjoyed my time as an alibi.\"
I can\'t wait to see how this pans out!
Please continue. Severus has some explaining to do.
I can\'t wait to see how this pans out!
Please continue. Severus has some explaining to do.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 11, it was totally awesome!!!! Wonderful writing, loved the picnic scene, and the fact that she let him see in her mind to see the dream!!! Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in so long, but I am going straight to the next chappie. From that ending I think that there may be lemons ahead!!! WWEEEE off I go!!! Great job keep up the good work!!!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another kick ass chapter!!!! I LOVED \"those strange twists of personality that females possessed and males were unreasonably terrified of.\" LOL!!! That was freaking awesome!!! I loved the little fight that they had, it was very well written. I love the way you write you characters and I also loved the line \"You have caused me more suffering in a short amount of time than Voldemorte has done in the past twenty years!!\" Hee hee, you are the best!!! Can\'t wait to read the next one!!!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the scene was beautifully written. It always happens that way doesn\'t it ? Voldemort has terrible timing.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason when i read what you named the lizard, it reminded me of the song, \'Santa Baby\', it\'s so cute. The marmalade dream was real hot. I would\'ve loved to spred it all over him.