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for Unwanted Savior

by MarvoloSledgehammer

person acr
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry. ANd poor sirius. They\'re going to be so confused.
person tessa3
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* awesome.. way to wake harry there...lol... but even funnier when he ran to the bathroom to finish *coughs* said business that the \"stranger\" started.. *giggles*

an Airhead Luc *blinks* dude..he had a blond moment *laughing*

and last but not least.. the picture on Harry\'s face when he realized that the stranger was none other than Tom.. oh that was Kodak!!!
person Ryu
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Just one thing. If Lucius turned 360 degrees it means that he made a complete circle...he turned in a circle? Was he trying to chase his tail or something?^^;;
person Irihi Safaia
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* YAYness. I love it. Poor Sirius is gone on a wild hunt. I want to see more Harry/Tom tho. And someone bitch-slap Lucius again please! *bounces* *goes to check your recs*
person icestar
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh, nice chapter. ^_^ poor remus will hall white hair soon. :P

cool story. ^_^ :thumbs up:
person tessa3
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* lol... oh lord.. the knuckle head is gone already... i swear if Albus would just tell the entire truth then none of this would have happen but then again... *grabs hair* ARGH!!!! I am shutting up now.. i still think Sirius has serious Gryffin issues (running impluses and such things like that *giggles*) *coughs* ummm yea.. Lucius.. yes that blond hair gentleman..*giggles* he\'s jealous...lol.. now that i find funny.. he\'s jealous of Harry.. AYE!!! i wonder what Har is going to say when he wakes up *taps chin* hmmm that will be something to watch...lol.. anyhoo... until next chappie
person yoroshiku
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooohoooooooooo!!! i luv it! so, when\'s the next one comming?
person Tamura
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this. i\'m getting such a kick out of reading it. please continue asap. now i have only one question: how can dumbledore be so calm about it? i mean, harry\'s supposed to destroy tom and he can\'t really do that if they have a bond... hmmm.
person acr
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. Please continue.
person sammy
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like where this is going update asap