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for Mr Brightside\'s Jealousy

by foxracerchick129

person shadow
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting choice of words. It\' s a pretty good story. quite cute. Having a missunderstanding throw into the mix. ahhaha. Having both character realize (at least harry) what is there more to a relationship.
person Ang
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute Cute Cute! Yes I totally adore that song too. It might be kinda cool if you did an epilogue or a little follow up.
person Velvetina
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ithink this demands another chappie to see Sev\'s reactions to Harrys mistrust...please *bats eyes* Lol lovely piece though seriously heart warming.
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love it! I love the song too.
person LPhoenix
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful... simply wonderful!!!!
person Jamie Blancard
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s so cute :D I love that you turned the lover into the guy from the song..and I\'m always a fan of Harry and Snape >D wonderful little story..I\'m happy Mr. Brightside found his happy ending :D
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww guys i\'m sorry I meant to end it their. I must have forgotten to put \'fin\'. lol. I would continue it if i werent working on 3 other fics at the moment, maybe once i finish one or two of them up i\'ll continue this, just not now.

Love you guys thank you so much for reviewing! - Jessica
person Laney
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! Really incredible

I never thank you for your encouraging reviews, so thank you! And keep writing...I loved this one!
person Joey
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was \"Choking on your alibis?\"
person antipyro
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, especially the way you\'ve woven the song into the fic.

Great imagination on your part about Severus\' secret mission...*snickers* but did he do \'it\' with a woman????? Severus, being the devoted lover he is, would have circumvented that situation as best he could, but then, it\'s not in your story, so why worry about....[Am I rambling???.....]

Good luck with exams and yes, please hurry with your fics - time to finish them up.

Terrific writing!!!