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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I definitely can\'t wait to read more of this. I remembered that part of Kingdom Dreams as soon as I read it, although for the life of me I can\'t remember what the book is about. Great beginning.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! I cannot wait for this all to unfold into a great story. Looking very good!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start to a great story. I can\'t wait to read your next chapter. Great job and keep up the good work.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter it was very well written. Update soon please!!!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! so good!!!!!!! u have to continue! i love it. sooooo wonderful. i can\'t wait to read the rest so update, soon!!!!!!!!!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOHHHH!!! veddy naughty...and intriguing... (Did I spell that right? Oh, well, no matter.) anywho, can\'t wait till you post the next part. ~Caliko
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what?? how the hell are they marrying? the bastard raped her! oh man..please update soon.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, great start. Hope to read more soon; update soon.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice story. More, more more!