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for Caught in the Rain

by elibdally

person solisflos
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start... more please
person laural and Taylor
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Taylor: WOah okay umm yea that was rele cool but what the hell was the ending about? i mean c\'mon what happened next is there gonna be more? WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT!!!!!! plzkthnks btw they do make a kinda in a weird way good couple and HE ACTUALLY SHOWED SOMETHING OTEHER THAN HATRED DARE I SAY IT SEMI REMORSE? Brilliant!!

Laural: definatley needs to be updated. u cant just leave us hanging and wondering. what happened between then and the wedding?how will their marriage be. plz plz plz update and soon!
person rain
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The bride wore black and so did the guests. What a way to start a fic. This was dark, eloquent, and discriptive. Update soon.
person alejandra
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI, i like your story and i really want to know how is that after that, she have to marry him? how this is posible, i think maybe some one has to kill him what about Harry and Ron, he saw her after and he gone like nothing matter, i always think that ron is selly, but not until this point.

Please up date soon
person Soranji
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very interested in your story. I can\'t wait until you write more
person kitten
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is an interestin fic i am anxiously waitin for the 2nd part
person ladymalfoy730
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. And what\'s the new law?! Update soon please?!?!
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting let\'s see how they get along
person eve/roarke
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was checking if another of my favourites had updated when I came across
your story. Intriguing start, I can only conclude that the court have held a
shot-gun to Malfoy\'s head. Where Harry? Is he dead.
Well you\'ve caught me, now added to my update surf.
Update soon, please.
person geo
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m only on the first chapter but you got talent! I like it and I hope you keep it up!~~