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for Caught in the Rain

by elibdally

schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!! I need to read about it soon.
person Morgan80
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, would love to see what happens next.
person Tenar10r
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. You keep spelling "customer" as "Costumer".
person EmL
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I had given up on further chapters and have been so disappointed because the initial chapter was so compelling. I think that you can do wonderful things with this story, so I really hope you continue.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, can't wait for more.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For the longest time I thought this was a oneshot, and always believed it deserved to be expanded. I'm glad to see that you are picking up the story again.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definatley can't wait to read more.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are continuing this!!!
Please keep it up.

person Rosamund
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVED this update! Can't wait for you to move the story along...hopefully soon! Very soon! What will she ifnd out? Lucius was almost cute in his arrogant, demanding way.
person Fallen Star
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!! It scares me alittle that it hasn't been updated in a LONG TIME but if the chapters come along nicely I think it will be a wonderful story!!!