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December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story so far. I love dark Draco!
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Draco could possibly say to cause her to marry him, great story so far
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you have great story ideas. It would be lovely if you finished one fic before going to the next. Instead of leaving so many interesting fics abandoned.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. I wouldn't be able to carry such a burden on me shoulders. Poor hermione. Tough decision.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more? pls don't abandon this story
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey just one little thing I noticed before i rave how well the story is written: Veritaserum is clear.... As that's the only issue I have please write more. I'm very intrigued.
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow - I love this story...how Luke/Laura General hospitalish....
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! Its an original!
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMFG, I thought u abandoned this story, geez, it keeps getting better and better, that first chapter had me spinning, oh god please update soon again and dont leave this story in the dust.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This may be a hard one to sale. Love/obsession that climaxes to a violent act (in this case rape) is not a base for a romance of any type. The fear/resentment the victim experiences toward the assailant runs deeper that what you portray so far. I found element that victim also climaxed during the rape, interesting. Being dominated is one thing, hence consent. Clearly not the case here. I could only see this story progressing with the underlying theme of