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for Foolish boy

by ejab

person lojenn
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not one to go for first person narration, but in this it really works. It makes it much more intimate with Harry speaking directly to Lucius which culminates in the most intimate of scenes between two characters, sex and then the taking of life and power. So yeah, I like version number one. Way cool. Thank you so much for sharing!
person sevil
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is really the perfect Slytherin-role-model, isn
person Jessica Nightingale
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In one word !!!gReAt!!!
person Joey
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little fast there in the beginning, but a very nice ending. Your Snape\'s kind of a pushover, eh? I\'ve always liked a bit of good sub, run with it!
person Alauralen
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG was that good!!!! Excellent work!!!!