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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read some of your other stuff, but this is exceptional. Just love the humour.
Snape saying, \"Eat Shit\"????? lmao and the mirror from Albus, just priceless. Secretly, I think Severus likes to be Grumpy, it makes the world a better place having the drastic comparison. lol
Great fic, I hope the challenge is working out for you. The puppy dog, Heinz, is good, really softens up Severus. Nice job on keeping Severus straight and focussed on propriety, instead of Harry\'s arse, which will probably come later on.
Please post more and soon. Love the premise of Severus wanting Harry, just because.... it\'s about time.
Snape saying, \"Eat Shit\"????? lmao and the mirror from Albus, just priceless. Secretly, I think Severus likes to be Grumpy, it makes the world a better place having the drastic comparison. lol
Great fic, I hope the challenge is working out for you. The puppy dog, Heinz, is good, really softens up Severus. Nice job on keeping Severus straight and focussed on propriety, instead of Harry\'s arse, which will probably come later on.
Please post more and soon. Love the premise of Severus wanting Harry, just because.... it\'s about time.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I throughly enjoyed reading it, this has a lot of potential in my opinion.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story your off to a very good start. im hoping to see more. Can\'t wait. Update as soon as possible and keep up the great work.
Jackie
Jackie
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks great so far, puppy is a little silly but I am so excited to see a snape pursues harry story!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I should like to read more, please.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very charming with the puppy. I am looking forward to updates.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW! This is ADORABLE!!!! I love it! Please continue this soon, love the idea of snape and harry with a cute little puppy! Aww!
Love it! - Jessica
Love it! - Jessica
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I say really great fic? Sorry, I didn\'t want to leave this post empty after posting before. Terrific work!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what the challenge is, but your story starts off very nicely. To have Snape decide so soon that he is going to have an affair with Potter takes some of the fun out of the chase, but you also told us that Dumbledore and McGonagal also expect them to get together. I do wonder what is the time frame for this story? Harry seems so innocent and untouched as yet that I would guess him to be second or third year. I like Heinz. He\'s a nice device for Harry to visit with Snape. More please.