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heheheheheheh i love this fic it rocks sertiously awesome

Great fic, keep it up! I love the way you described Hermonie getting ready.

your doing well on the fic but some things are off like you have Harry, Ron, Ginny, and Hermione all talking about sex like there 13 or 14 and there not sure of themselves and then there great with each other and talking like there in collage you might want to keep there maturity level a little more even and how old are they in your fic what year are they in hope this doesn

I like it, keep up the good work, maybe add a little more detail

Excellent story so far. Hoping you\'ll add another chapter soon.