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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great!!! i can't wait for the next part. i really don't see much if anything thing wroung in the way You write just keep the stories coming your a natural writer.
ankishly wanting
~freya
ankishly wanting
~freya
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a good story going. Slow your time line down a bit, there is a long time between christmas and the end of the school year, and there are still many ways to do in that rat bag draco and friends. You are writing this as a learning experience, and there are a lot of things to learn. Take it slow, and put some thought into it. You'll do fine.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Technically and mechanically well written. I liked your restraint in not using scatological language where it did not fit or for exclamations. It is hard to strike a balance between sexually explicit writing and foul mouth drivel. You do it well. I hope you will continue this. I am anxious to know the secret of the \"lesson book\".
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really is outstanding stuff, great work. I\'m looking forward to the second part, but you made a small mistake. Ginny has brown eyes, it is said in the second novel. you might want to fix that mistake.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Please write some more harry/ginny soon.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay the thing that confuses me is What in the hell is that book thingy? hmmmm? that\'s the only question i have.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was incredibly hot.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, Great, love your writing style and wit.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was a good read. i was wondering if you have ever writen any thing other than things like this for you obveusly has wrighting talint.