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for The Broom Closet *redone*

by Crystal56

person amanda
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person Hambares
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did you get that out of your system? You gave me a great laugh. Now I can go to bed with a smile on my face! On with the story.....keep up the good work.
person Rachel
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha, I love the who-should-be-bottom forum. Very funny.

Oh, before I forget: Irene, bugger off.

And why exactly your fic is not original? Too many closet fics? Too many Harry/Snape fics? Too many mpreg fics? Get real, after a while it\'s obvious that a few fics will have some details in common. Nothing wrong in that. The important thing is how you write it, how good you are when writting your plot. (BTW you are doing a terrific job).

Well, that\'s what I wanted to say and I also wanted to ask: Is it done? Are there any more chapters coming on? If so (I do hope so) please up date.
person Blackrose
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now that was weird. Lol. Was that a side fic or a part of the story? Just wondering. Hope Sev makes up his mind soon. Hope he becomes a Father. By the way, good one, when you havd a go at that irene character. Man is she ever snotty. If she doesn\'t like a fic, she should piss off to another one and read something else. IRENE, PISS OFF! STOP DISSING THIS FIC BECAUSE IT\'S REALLY GREAT! IDIOT!
Looking forward to reading more of your story.
person Blackrose
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Irene, you\'re a major cow. Just read you review and it\'s spiteful. Bet you haven\'t done any good stories. Don\'t worry, if you have I\'ll be sure to flame them. I agree with the other reviewers and writer. Bugger off. Go flame your own stories, if you have any.
With that out the way, keep up with the GREAT work on this story. It\'s really cool.
person woof
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love the discussion!!!!! What a giggle on a slow night. Thank you!!!!!!! My thought, you could have them switch top/bottom weekly or daily and both get pregnant. That would stir up a whole nother can o\' worms!!!!!
person amanda
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to read more of this story
person amanda
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to read more of this story
person akuma_river
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.

Some fics have them accept it right away, this is more realistic.

Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person Phoenix 5
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI,

I\'ll not answer for the contest, because I read it once. I like it and am very glad you have rewrite, so I can re-read it in there.
So Thanks
Phoenix