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for The Broom Closet *redone*

by Crystal56

person Blackrose
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blimey. You really know your stuff. Wish I could flat out tell people to bugger off. That Irene cow should bugger off though. She\'s insulting a really great story, but it also seems to be inspiring you. Why\'s that? Anyways keep it up. Looking forward to reading more.
person Patrick
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is honestly one of the best HP stories I\'ve come across, ever, on any site. I absolutely love it, and I can\'t wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the brilliant work
person Patrick
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Before I forget, Irene absolutely has no idea what in the world she is talking about. The characters are marvelously developed, the plot is riviting and entertaining, and the little bit of smut there is truly is top notch. So, honestly I think she is nothing more then a jealous witch, although you might want to substitute that w with a b. Anyways, can\'t wait for the story to continue
person woof
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwww,sweet and cuddly Snape !!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!
person Irene
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okie, it\'s good that your at least defending urself. Yes, I was snotty but that\'s how I get when i don\'t like something. Yes that was critism.
I clearly mentioned that ur characters aren\'t developed which basically messes up ur \"plot\". I came back because of my curiousity whether or not there was any respond. lol there was. If you really don\'t care about my review why did you get all bent out of shape about it? YOu would think that with all ur little followers you wouldn\'t feel the need to make a whole commentary. But whatever have fun. I just stated my opinion, i thought that was obvious. Get over it. It\'s not even that serious. Ur story about the bottom thing wasn\'t that amusing..the only thing that was amusing was that you actually wrote it. But you have my respect for defending urself in such a manner, I don\'t care if you need it.
Where did i say that ur story should be all about smut? And as much as you don\'t want to believe it, smut is a very large part of fanfiction..especially here on AdultFanFiction.NEt. By not havin smut, your defeating the purpose of this place. It was made for writers to put stuff on here that they can\'t on fanfiction.net because of restrictions. You might as well go there.
person tweenyrules
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, liked this story the first time round, it is even better now! Look forward to the next update!
person Hambares
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for the update!
person woof
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Share the marshmallows!!!!!!!! Still liking this story!!!!!! Poor hormonal Harry.....
person Phoenix 5
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI,
I like this version very, very much, don\'t make us wait too long for next chapter.
person amanda
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon