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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this fic. which order member did HP kill in the library? update soon.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Job! I was really worried that Harry would go thru all of this preparation and find Tom unwilling to accept him. I like how he asked Snape to make him a potion so he would know his mate at first sight. Very Romantic! I can\'t stand Dumbledore either and love all Ronald Dahl stories. His wit is extremely challenging to anyone obsessed with black/white behavior; this could also explain why I love Voldemort/Harry stories so much! I hope you update soon and it\'s cool you\'re considering having Harry lay eggs. Only that seems to me as a contrast as his adoptive family wanted him to learn about human nature but I have full faith you can make it work if you chose to go that way. Please consider having Charlie or Bill as Death Eaters over the typical Fred and George angle. Nothing against them but you never see enough of Charlie or Bill and they both work with creatures with dark overtones but it\'s just a thought on my part. Keep up the Great Work and I look forward to reading your next chapter! By the way, I really like how you are using bits of Matilda in Harry so feel free to experiment all you want! Thanks Again, Slayerq
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really cool. I\'m glad you mentioned the Matilda thing or I would\'ve gotten really confused. This has the potenial to be a really great story. I like how you made Harry mature but still childish and innocent. Its really great.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Don\'t kill Sirius, unless he\'s still in Prison, that would be good. Umm...Ok this is pretty cool but I think your moving things along a little too fast. Try to slow things down just a little. Keep up the good work.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe stupid Dumbledore. Idoit that he is. I hope you didn\'t have Sirius there. I dont want him or Remus to die.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The actress you is looking for is named Mara Wilson. I know this because I read the book years ago, plus I saw the movie. I like this so far, the pairing\'s not my cup of tea, but if you make Voldemort look like a young Tom Riddle, prehpas I wouldn\'t mind the pairing...It\'s rare to find a Harry that\'s doesn\'t blame himself for the abuse...
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeeks sadly* More! *cries* I wanna know how Tom takes finding out that Sly is really Harry now that he\'s not mortally wounded! And who the bugger is bothering him? *shakes fist at whoever is on the other side of that door* Unless it\'s Sev, they\'d better be prepared to die... and if it IS Sev... he better be prepared to face some torture :-p
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for you to update-I really like this fic!!