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for One Of Us Is Gonna Die Young

by reetinkerbell

person WesleyY7
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really liked the tone of this. And I was so worried it would have an unhappy ending, with the song choices and all. I kept waiting for Draco to find Hermione dying on the battlefield. When that didn't happen, I was worried she would leave him for Ron or get killed by a rogue Death Eater. So, yay for happy endings! Whew!
person Stag
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest and say, I never read this fic because judging the name, I thought it was going to depress me. But I'm so mad at myself for not clicking on it! *smacks self*
person Kara
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love your stuff. if this makes any sense, your \'smut\' wasnt all that smutty. it was very well written, and when a sex scene is written well is when it is decifered from the smut catigory. well done. didnt like the ending though, it was one of those endings where there seems like there should be more to the story...like on malcolm in the middle. * shrugs*
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful. I loved the meaning behind speinding the night, eating together. That whole middle portion was really good. Also I loved the ending.
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I loved it!! It was so well written and sad during the war parts. And I loved how you didn\'t really use dialogue in the beginning... ur writing style is amazing. I really felt the tension befor the war started and I really understood how each character felt. And the whole thing with Hermione, fearing someone standing behind her... GREAT! And I loved how you put in that \'no one could touch hermione anymore without asking first.\' and saying Draco was glad about it... hehehehe... I really liked it! Bravo!!! email me if you decide to write another. If it\'s D/Hr again of course!!! ;D
person bgard
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Decently written. I enjoyed reading it. Personally I don\'t think Harry being killed that far fetched.
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its okay, like you said, its a bit on the cheesy side which I don\'t usually like in D/Hr fics.. but it was still a decent read. I wish you could have gone more into the characters, elaborating on their thoughts and actions more would have been nice. I\'m not saying your fic was bad, I enjoyed it! Just wanted to note that.
person -
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh. its was ok.
person Triospleasure
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Ree This was great!

I like your Draco...

I told you you were a good writer!!!

Trio