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for Learning and Teaching 4

by FyreFaerie

person Hambares
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t care how you set your story up (chapters or like a mini series), just please keep it coming! This is so good!
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When Lady Ravenclaw died her magic could\'ve hidden her chamber. If she\'s a clever witch she\'d have it boobytrapped to where only her heirs could break the traps.
Fred and George would have fun learning ancient pranks from her. The tower is probably there you just have to summon it. Could there be clues possibly? Like Symbols? Ancient clues are very cool.
person Missi
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for more. I like the miniseries style-this makes it more attention grabbing. Plus, I can grab a quick read before making supper as opposed to sitting for two hours trying to remember what happened at the top of the screen.
person antipyro
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a crater! Some fireball of terror in old Voldemort now. Can\'t wait for the last fight.

So, if Dumbledore doesn\'t know of the eighth tower and he\'s, what? 160 odd years old, because he\'s the one who fought off Grindelwald, in 1945. Then when did the tower disappear? He was born in 1840. Thank you HP Lexicon.

I hope Harry\'s wards hold on the new place. This is going to be one tough fight!

Please, more story....sooon.
person Missi
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! I didn\'t review the other 3 cause I just found them and read them straight thru, but I just SO can\'t wait for the next post!! This is so exciting!
person Lady Allylandra
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i was just wondering 1) if you are gonna continue this as a new story or if you are just gonna chapter it 2) why is it you have put them all in new stories rather than chapters it gets annoyin when you are reading them for the forth or fifth time. I should know. I love this story it is excellent and believe me i have read quite a few (having spent most of my time over the last 4 years doing nothing but reading them) i would just like to add that purhaps you shouldn\'t be in such a hurry to get to the ending. Space it out add some angst everyone loves angst coz we all know it is going to be ok (except in a few minorities Blub!) and don\'t forget more sex sex sex sex gotta have it gotta love it. Cheers ofr the great stort it is berilliant
person Faeriefire
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been having fun reading your story as it comes along, it\'s very well written and a joy to read. Keep up the great work!
person isis
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! i love these stories they are absolutly brilliant. pleeeeeeeeease keep writin them as i\'m dyin to find out how it ends!!! love isis xxx
person antipyro
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, a hateful Ron! This is definately different.

I really liked the vine from Neville\'s hand, very ingenious. Baise and Neville, well why not? They do seem to suit being paired together.

Please post more of this soon. It has a great beginning and I\'m anxious to see more of it.
person Hambares
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you had an update. I didn\'t know the other three parts were out there. Now I have read them all and am really looking forward to the rest! Keep up the good work!