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by Kaspjo

person Laken
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...i really like this story. please write more.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Maybe Harry needs to set Ron up with Hermione. Can\'t wait for chapter 5!
person elecktra
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person katina
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I really like the story but the way that draco talks harry...you know the \"bud\", and \"kid\" makes him sound a bit younger than draco so I just thought that was kind of weird..but yeah anyway I liked the story and I hope you update soon which you seem to be doing so I\'m not worried...MUY BIEN!!!! *katina*
person Alexa
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really starting to like this story.
I have some problem with the ease that Draco is accepting the possible problems and such. The most popular guy in school, in the real world, would worry much more.
I\'m not saying he wouldn\'t do it (allthough he probably wouldn\'t), but he woulf show some concern and nerves.
I wander if Harry\'s dad knows. I hope he doesn\'t know for sure that Harry is gay and the boys let it slip or just tell him. I would love to see the expression on his face.
Update soon! :-)
person sam
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good continue
person swampthang
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
person R
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, I\'m not sure what I think about how Ron acted though. He was kind of acting like a jerk, I hope that sorts itself out. Keep up the great work and please update soon!
person R
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, I especially liked the end when James found them cuddling... it was so cute!! I have a question, where\'s Lily? Great chapter, please update soon!!
person Lady X
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He took it a bit too well if you ask me. I mean i know some people don\'t care one way or the other, like me, but still it would be a really big shock and knowing Rons temper in the books and i was thinking you were keeping them as in char as possible in the situation he took it a little too well. Other than that another great chapter. Loved it. Harry falls asleep alot doesnt he? I think its cute though.
Lady X