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Thanks for the fast update! Nice chapter.

It\'s surprising that Draco\'s teammates would be so cruel to him. They know that he is essential for their team\'s success. Why would they jeopardize that? Or are all of them just plain stupid?

I think Harry cries too much. To be gay does not mean to be a girl. Harry behaves as such, cries all the time, gets sacred of girls. He should have a bone somewhere.

I\'ll be traveling for a while and will be with no access to internet. I\'ll keep review the story when I am back. Good luck!

That was a great chapter! I thought it was so cute when Harry answered the door and jumped at Draco... very sweet. Well I for one, would like to know where Lily and Narcissa are (or what happened to them) so if you want to put that into your story line that would be cool. Keep up the great work and please update soon!

That was great! I loved it!! I soo can

It seems that Draco was too cruel to his dying father. I guess he must have had a good reason to behave this way. How did Lucius drive Draco to suicide attempts you mentioned earlier?

AW! They are so sweet together! Update soon

Great story! I love AU but this is one of the best I\'ve read... It\'s realistic! Um, idea wise you could have Draco quit the team and Harry be all upset because Draco quit, thinking it\'s his fault then have Draco explain in a very loving situation that he didn\'t quit because he couldn\'t take both Harry and football, but because Harry made him realize his priorities and Harry just happened to be at the top and then have Draco explain to Harry how much he loves him and how he can\'t live without him, leading to a sex scene. That\'s my romantic idea. My action idea is to have Harry join the team to boost Draco\'s confidence and keep him playing. The whole school seems to be ridiculing them now especially seeing as no one knows Harry\'s potential except Draco and James. Then James can make a lovely guest appearance at one of Harry\'s games and something can happen between Snape and James and Harry and Draco are now the stars fo the field after an amazing jaw-dropping game. If you want you could even take that and go into a game where Harry gets the shit beat out of him because the very vicious opposing team realizes he isn\'t as tuff as he seems. Harry gets rused to the hospital and Draco is traumatized, thinking it\'s his fault cause Harry joined the team for him and this will put their love to a huge test as Harry\'s on the edge of sl;ipping into a comma. You could probably work Draco\'s dad into it somewhere as well. Well, anyways, those are my ideas, feel free to use them. Keep up the good work.
-TONOLostGirl
PS- where is Lily? and why did Harry move in the first place?

Great update! I hope you update soon!!!

That was an incredible chapter. I loved when Draco kept getting up after every tackle, I thought that was very noble and it seemed like something the cannon Draco would do. You did a great job! I\'m definitely excited for chapter 12! Keep up the awesome work, you\'re doing great!

POOR DRACO AND HARRY! PANSY IS SUCH A BITCH AND CRAB NEEDS TO GET SLAPPED IN THE HEAD!

UPDATE SOON! I CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

POOR DRACO AND HARRY! PANSY IS SUCH A BITCH AND CRAB NEEDS TO GET SLAPPED IN THE HEAD!

UPDATE SOON! I CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!