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for Things can change

by slykitten

person micha
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS CHAPTER. IMAGEN WHAT WILL DRACO DO? IF HERMIONE GETS RAPE? (I\'M NOT MEAN, BUT, HEY, WHAT WILL HE DO?)
person eve/roarke
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is improving all the time, keep going
begining to really enjoy the interaction between your
charectors. Update soon please. Thanks.
person stephanie
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! Especially the part about the sexually transmitted disease! Post more soon please!!!!!!!
person claudia
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE UR STORY. UP DATE SOON.^ ^
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person Andrew
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, but it needs to be moved a little quicker, those 4 chapters could\'ve been 2 or even 1 chapter easily. But I like how you keep everyone in character! Great work!
person luna
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definitely an interesting beginning, but where is it going?
pick up the speed a little, and this could be very good.
Update soon.
person Cadence
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m lovin it! (Not McDonalds) That\'s what he gets.....dun dun dunnnnnnn
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, this is pretty good. I like it. I hope you update soon!! I can\'t wait to read more!!!
person Elmo
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the second chapters better than the first! keep updating
person jchaser
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start...cannot wait to see where you take it. Loved D/H exchange - it sounded just like them.