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for Harry\'s Angel

by silverwoman

person Alexa
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With total respect to your beta MAFIA, who I\'m sure is a great help, and who must be wonderful friend to be proof reading your stories, I think two heads might be better than one? If people keep finding faults, would you like to make a sort of double fire-wall for grammar and spelling? If you\'d like and MAFIA wouldn\'t be affended by it, I\'d like to offer to add my head to the mix. I can go over the story to see if anything was missed in the first proof-reading. And not because the first one was bad, but just because we\'re all human, and two heads *are* better than one. And it would help to cut down on the annoying comments.
person person
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked! Sweet pendant. I want one. *pouts* Muwahahahaha, and thus the plot doth thicken. Kick ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Viridiana
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the Cedric\'s part, I saw him like the Harry
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonder if Harry knows about the bet from last year? What happens in chapter 8?
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I don\'t see Draco falling for Harry anytime soon. Can\'t wait for chapter 7!
person Viridiana
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I LOVE THIS DRACO!!! Really amazing!!!!!!
and when Harry\'s anger bubbled up for the Draco\'s tears...WWWOOOWWW!!!!
A question, at Blaise, likes Draco? I very hope yes, because bad!Harry is great but
badANDjealousANDpossessive!Harry about Draco is Hot!! ^___-
Great Story!! update soon please!! A kiss Viridiana
ps: sorry my terrible English!
person niamh
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg u write such short chapters!! please update soon, you have a great sounding plot, just the chapters are so freakin short! and could you make draco be not such a girl?! please? and maybe harry can have seen the tears and be all sad that he made draco cry and try to make it up to him by sending him flowers and generally courting him. THAT would be sweet.

update (with a longer chapter!) soon please
person zentiis
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
harry got bitch slapped?!?! lol, classssic!
person cavegold
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually like this story so I\'ll wait. As long as you make sure you are going to continue. I really hate A/Ns because you think it\'s a new chapter. At the same time it\'s better to know what\'s going on with a story than to coming on line everyday and not finding an update. Cheers.