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bahh boring harry did the same thing twice (advance and kiss draco) and draco did the same thing back twice (bit him) *snore* and it just got worse since tom came, i mean pfft annoying i wish it was just a draco harry story and the plot sounded good...oh well

I don\'t see a lot of grammer probs and if there is I have no problem with being able to read it comfortably. I find the story moves quite slowly and really says the same thing over and over but I attribute that to getting started. I am however really appalled to your out and out anger at your reviewers. Because some people say things you don\'t agree with doesn\'t give you the right to be abusive. let your reviewers make you stronger. If they have a good point that you can even agree with yourself that will make you a better author and a better story to be born, then great. If you don\'t agree then ignore it and stay true to the course. We all have the right to be wrong. The fact that we haven\'t mind melded would clearly set us all up to see things differently and that in itself deserves respect. I don\'t know about you but I love differences of opinion and don\'t feel endangered by them at all, in fact I welcome them. It\'s all about respect, you know what I mean. If we give it to others perhaps If we are lucky we ourselves might get it in return, though I wouldn\'t count on it, but we have to start somewhere don\'t we?

W00t, pwned. Totally pwned. (in case you don\'t know, pwned is like owned, only even more so) That\'s so cool. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

This should be fun! Can\'t wait for chapter 9!

well, harry\'s really good at being an asshole so far. go tom!! clobber him!! woohoo!!

ahoy hoy there! like the stroy cool reverse lives thing you kinda got going on. anyway i found you through my lil sis tonolostgirl and i beta all of her stuff so id be more than willing to help out some since your readers obviously aren\'t too happy. email me and let me know
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Enter Tom!!!???? What BIG SURPRISE!! Compliments!! Really a Great Idea!! Harry VS Tom fom win Draco

Need chapter 9! What does he say? Does he keep the gift? Will he wear it?

I really like your story and i want to read more as soon
as possible....::waiting::....are you ready to update yet?
No?...::waiting:: Anywho update soon. I luv Draco ::Heart eyes::
And i luv it when harry is bad. hehe also i luv them together so your fic is
great for me to read! hehe

You should update more often because I totally forgot what Harry did to Draco though with as many fics as I read that is possible but usually the good ones stick in my head. Anyways nice chapter have to say I thought it was the best one so far so keep up the writing.