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for Collide

by AshleyZ

person DragonsLore
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOh I wish you would continue this story if only for another chapter to let us know how Harry and Ron took to the news. Great story! Continue.
person DragonsLore
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOh I wish you would continue this story if only for another chapter to let us know how Harry and Ron took to the news. Great story! Continue.
person DragonsLore
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOh I wish you would continue this story if only for another chapter to let us know how Harry and Ron took to the news. Great story! Continue.
person Vee
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. It\'s D/Hr but Malfoy is still MAlfoy, none of that pansifying that happens in so many fics. I love his possessive streak and also his sadistic side that is just revelling in the future reactions of Ron and Harry about Hermione being pregnant with his child. Excellent characterizations!
person sailormoonhannah
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this fic!!!!! it was sooooooooooo good you sould make another chapter or 5!!!!!
person eve/roarke
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Ashleyfanfic that really was a brilliant piece of writing.

Draco was at his snoby best and I like him in charecter. The sex
was very hot and even sexier with her keeping his shirt on.
She\'s pregnant is she openly walking around or using charms
to conceal, you didn\'t say. A one off, or perhaps the start of another
really good story.
P.S. I know readers are pain in the bum, but may I remind you about
a certain Veela fanfic? Ouch I smacked myself.
person Lexi
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! Twisted but good.
person Jennifer Carter
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...very nice. Are you going to add any more? Like how her friends react?
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! Wow, too bad it was a one shot i\'m guessing?? Very beautifully written I must say. The wording was perfect and the whole idea was absolutely wonderful. I loved the whole pregnancy thing... I just wish you had continued so I could find out what happened to the lovely couple!!