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for Victory For All

by Steffanie

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, i saw it over at ff.net, but couldnt pull up the second chapter, so cool to see it here.
person prin69
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, it rox
person JW
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sneaky, putting Lucius there in a scary dream/nightmare sequence. Donkey head - ewww! Poor Severus, not very flattering to have her wake up during sex thinking of donkey-Lucius. Thanks for the happy ending and getting them all married!
person Drake
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How very odd... it was good writing, but the whole dream sequence confused me...
person lovethelab
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That dream sequence was the funniest thing I have read in I don\'t know how long! And the wonderful happy ending was nice too!
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEH HEH HEH! Yesssss...... cold gray eyes indeed! YUM! But not as delicious asthose black obsidian ones! HEE HEE! You\'ll see! Oh, you will definitely see! HAHA! Toodles!
person ancientgirl
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, cold grey eyes? I get the feeling Lucius will be in the next chapter, and this hsi getting interesting!