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uh?
why is he in the past?
we do need an expliantion
please update soon

Wtf? Im so confused.

Woah, I\'m a little confused.
How did Harry get to his parents time, and why dont they realize how much he looks like both of them?
How did Severus know Harry already, when everyone else didnt?
Does Dumbledore know that Harry is ... well Harry?

And theres a lot of grammar problems.

Other than the unanswered questions and the grammar, I really like it so far. Cant wait for the next update

- Jessica

This story hasn\'t established much of a plot, not that one is required, but it jumps around very suddenly. If you could give us a little more explanations of what\'s going on and why, I\'m sure this storyline can be made into a great fic. The title suggests that Harry has gone back to a previous timeline, why, I can only imagine. Does he want his children to be born then? or is something else due to be set in motion?????

You have a great talent for writing, please don\'t dismiss it by rushing through your stories. I know that everyone wants updates \'yesterday\' because the stories here are really good. I don\'t want to disuade you from writing, but please, a little more time and care will make us just as hungry to read them and review with much applause and confections for you and your muse(s).

You\'ve managed to portray the characters, now just develop the story line. If I\'ve jumped the gun on you, I\'m sorry. I\'m usually very patient and understanding. I also know that you\'ve updated 5 of your fic this day alone. WOW! you should rest and enjoy the experience, like we do.

Thanks again for your stories, I\'ll keep reading just to see what happens!