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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great, but short chapters!
Very easy to read, really fast, so just keep them coming.....!!!!!
Thanks!
Very easy to read, really fast, so just keep them coming.....!!!!!
Thanks!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story verry much,bye
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the explanation.
Keep writing and post soon.
Keep writing and post soon.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please? And Thank You?
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too short, way too short.
Can\'t you have mercy on us and write longer chapters?
Can\'t you have mercy on us and write longer chapters?
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the explaination! It really helps. Now on with the fic.......please...begs....
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should ignore your bad reviews! You have a lot of talent and you shouldn\'t feel dejected over some of the comments made, yes your grammer isn\'t fantastic but maybe you just need a BETA, or to check your work before posting! I like this story so far, though I do have some questions about the plot, but I\'m sure it will be incorporated into the coming chapters! Please post again soon, this story has to much potential just to be left where it is!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
some of these are a bit short, but its a cool outline. hope to see more ^_^
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why did harry go back in time and how? why is sev his mate?
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Harry back in time?
Why does Snape not seem confused as to why he suddenly has a mate and that said mate is pregnant?
Short chapters but interesting story. Just need some background information for your poor struggling readers! Thanx!
Why does Snape not seem confused as to why he suddenly has a mate and that said mate is pregnant?
Short chapters but interesting story. Just need some background information for your poor struggling readers! Thanx!