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for Just One Step Back

by lonewerewolf

person Hambares
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who has Harry? Hope we find out soon!!! Thanx for updating!
person tessa3
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT *blink* uh i need another chapter.. that was just WRONG!!! *falls down*
person Eowynselixure
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I like this! I really do! But whts with the amazingly short chapters?

*Eowyns elixure
person Missi
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN NAIL BITING CLIFFIES!! My manacurist is so angry at you, but I\'m totally loving this!! Please update soon.
person Hambares
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a cliffhanger! Rats. Great job!
person antipyro
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE???????

This is such a stunner, my jaw is still hanging open....*GAH!!!!*

Don\'t leave us in suspense, please post very soon, like today or at the latest, tomorrow.

Please???!
person momoko
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapters,bye
person Jane-Lily
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH Please Continue, This is so good! your chapters are a little short though but the plot is great.
person icestar
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm... maybe you could type the chapters in word? or get the betad...

anyways, nice. just make sure you dont get names mixed. (remus/severus for some reason....) still like the story, though the chappies are short :P
person Missi
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More. Definately need more. *throws self of ground, begging shamelessly* pleasepleasepleaseplease?