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god! these chapters are too short!!! please make them bigger. it is better to read a good story that has big chapters than good stories with short chapters!!

c ya!

come on the wait is killing me UPDATE... PREETY PLEASE sugar plums...and pumpkin pie on top with whip cream...

(hmm lots of evil thoughts about that whip cream maybe I'll keep that for myself...nahhh I WANT THE UPDATE)

wow. i wonder. could it be future pettigrew. nah. not. ingenious though. one minute you think that young peters bad then you find out he aint that bad. a brilliant and very interesting read. please update this fic soon. i want, i hope, i\'m begging you,to show harry back with sev. either sev. i don tmind. just a sev. you are fab. GO YOU!!!!!!!

ya know your story is not how i wanted it to be i wanted them to be together for 2 years before he is sent back sev knew he was from the future he goes back snape wants nothing to do with him but its only becuase he doesnt think harry wants him thats untill harry finds out hes pregnant they are having a row maby when he gets back three weeks back maby and harry shouts at him telling him he would always love him no matter what that he was his first love and only. that he didint want to go with anyone else coz he knew snape didint want him for the boy who lived he was starting to beleve him when harry falls they go to the hospital wing and told that harry is pregnant with three children snape faints knowing they are his hehe they get together !! after that whooo ofourse voldi is dead it was him who sent him back he ends up in the same spot he knew he was pregnant and would protect his child at all costs kills voldi without a second thought he takes sevs dark mark away kisses him and falls unconsious when he falls unconsious he forgets certain things like being preggie he was told again then sev in another few weeks gets told hes preggie and ends up with either triplets or twins if you do this please use my names

damon sebastian potter snape
severus james potter snape
alexander harry potter snape
lilian sabrina potter snape
serena heather potter snape
emls dickon potter snape

While this story has the makings of a good one, you need to work on it. You should write a bit about what happened to make Harry come to the past instead of just saying it as an author to your readers. Also, make the chapters longer instead of just having one paragraph as a chapter.

I hope to read more.

Well, at least it\'s easy to catch up when the chapters are short.

The story is developing very well now with the big mystery of who took Harry and why.

Will Snape ever get out of his bindings, even if to just stare at Peter? I really like the protectiveness of Snape, especially towards Lily and James. I think it\'s cute.

I\'ve marked this for continued reading, so please post the updates soon.

its the older pettigrew ! hes came back in time !! holy shit he better not lose his kid it will not be very fair

good chapter

OH HELL NO!!! *glares* EVIL EVIL CHAPTER!!!!!

Cliffie!! Drama, excitement, intrigue, I hope Severus kills people, oh this is wonderful!! Please update soon!!