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for Into The Light

by Helbling

person angel
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow please update soon would love to read what till happen next and in tillthen keep up the awesoem work and later fro now

angel
person Alaualen
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!! Interesting ending, can\'t wait to read more!! Loved how Poppy handled the kids, it was great to have Snape be envious of her!! Keep up the good work!!

Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
person soniab
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Another great chapter, I really love this story it\'s great... What else can I say, except update A.S.A.P.
Cheers, Sonia
person Alauralen
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was horrible!! The poor girl!! Wonderful writting, I can\'t wait to get to the next chappie!! Very good job!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person Bambu
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, your newest chapter is hopeful and heartbreaking all in one. I absolutely loved Minerva in this. She\'s staunchly loyal and fierce and all that a Gryffindor and a mature witch should be. I know that this is your own story, but there is a small part of me that would dearly love to see Minerva be the one to send Umbridge \'to that chilly North Sea isle for all time.\'

Good luck with your semester and your classes, and I\'ll look for your next chapter... The holidays aren\'t too terribly far away.
person Alexis
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Write more, please!
person Karen
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent development of Hermione\'s leaving the thought processes of captivity behind. Looking forward to more.

Thanks
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is brilliant. I can\'t wait for your next update. Your Snape is very believable and I love how Hermione\'s recovery isn\'t being rushed. The changing relationship between Harry and Snape is also interesting, and the whole Umbridge factor adds another element of conflict to the story. It\'s really well written, good job, keep it up.
person June
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This isn\'t a review - I just want to be sure you see the top of this page. The site\'s admins just put up a notice:

NOTICE: Stories must contain Disclaimers (excluding Original Stories)! Any stories remaining without a Disclaimer by October 31, 2005 WILL BE DELETED! It is a big deal. We must protect the Site.

(It\'s just a legal thing so that they don\'t get sued by movie studios, book publishers, etc.) \'Into the Light\' doesn\'t have a disclaimer, so please-please-please add one so that it won\'t get deleted, or I won\'t be able to read anymore! Thank you. :=)
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM