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First of all, I want to say that I love this story and was very glad to see an update. You\'ve really got me hooked with this one and I look forward to each new installment. That said, I have to also respond to your recent A/N: Much as I\'d like to say \"no, keep updating often!\" I can\'t and won\'t say that. Your academic career is way more important! I\'m a grad student myself so I know how the work can really pile up sometimes. I also know how easy it is to let fanfic and other hobbies take up time that should be spent on work. For me at least, the more stressed-out I\'m feeling in real life, the more tempting it is to hang out online, read and write fiction, and do other \"escape\" activities. A while back, I came embarrassingly close to royally screwing up my grad program because I was spending too much time working on a fanfic. You may not have the same problem -- not everyone is as addiction-prone as I am, thank goodness -- but I found it very easy to let a little \"fanfic break\" turn into a whole weekend. Writing my fic was *fun*. And it didn\'t hurt that I got the instant gratification of reading glowing reviews every time I posted an update. No one was flattering the hell out of me and begging for more when I finished a new section of my dissertation! Sounds like you have your priorities straight already, but I just wanted to lend some moral support. I\'ll be pleased as punch to read more of your story, but real life has to come first! Best of luck with your work. :) ~jane

Ch 10 - I\'ve suspected for a long time that the reason she agreed to have the slave bond put on her was because she made a deal with her captors. In exchange for her becoming their slave, they would take Ron Weasley to Hogwarts - and she just ASSUMED that they would take Ron alive, or let him stay alive once they got him to Hogwarts. So now she is remembering Ron, but not quite remembering; perhaps they Obliviated her memories? Very sad for Minerva to see her, but at least Minerva shows more restraint than Harry did at first. I do hope they get rid of Umbridge soon; in fact, perhaps Harry\'s mischief can get rid of Umbridge. Perhaps Hermione can stay busy by reading her old textbooks? THANK YOU for updating!!!

love your stuff. one typo though (sorry, beta to the core...)

Chapter 7 (VII)
I lack many basis social niceties, of this I am aware...

cheers,
tak.

I just had to stop reading halfway down the first page to send in this review -- it couldn\'t wait! I\'m loving this trip inside Snape\'s psyche. It is funny and logical, and the details are so very finely observed. Well done! Right, back to the story...

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Right, I have caught up and I think it is safe to say that this fic is getting better as you write it. I have bookmarked and look forward to more -- but, I do understand the whole study thing comes first! Good luck with that, btw.

This story is fabulous, and I can\'t wait to read more!! Keep up the amazing work! I understand abotu school and RL but, I\'ll be panting for new updates, too. :-)

Really good. Keep up the good work.

I look forward to your next chapter - damn real life! She put that anklet thing on to \"save\" Ron didn\'t she....? Please update as soon as you can!

I like your story but having your tubes tied does not cause a hormonal change. All it does is keep your eggs for being able to be fertilized and reach your womb. A total hysterectomy would cause hormone changes.

OMG that was sooooo goood!!!! I liked the part at the beginning of the first chapter, it made me lmao!! I love the angst at the end and hope that poor Hermione will be alright!! With Severus to help her through it though I am sure she will...Yummy potions master...anyway, I also felt sorry for Ron and Harry, who lost the two proplr he cared for most in just an instant. I LOVE this story!! Keep up the good work!!

Blessed be,
Alauralen