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Yes, that\'s what imprinting is in birds, but in Hermione\'s case, she has latched onto the first preson she sees acting in a recognisable manner (which is, giving her orders) because the Malfoys--ah, um, next chapter, baby! (*supresses ev-ol-ness*)

As for the teaser - hm, interesting suggestion, but no, not his son. Not a time-travel fic either. And, technically, not Potions Master Severus Snape, for the final nail in the coffin. Good guesses though.

Thanks for your reviews, btw, they\'re always great to recieve.

~S.b.

Oh yay! What a suspensful piece - please update soon!

Whoa, this is an intriguging begining. This doesn\'t sound like it\'s going to be your average love story, either. . . she\'s gone way-far out there. I hope you continue to write with this level of detail. I\'m looking forward to updates!

oh my god that is to good. When do you plan on p dating please say soon. this is just getting great write more will bow down and sacrifice many gummy bears to your cause.

Ch 1-2 - PS - are all the Malfoys dead now? For sure? Thanks!

interesting story. looking forward to reading more.

A very interesting turn indeed... here are the tortured and corrupted ends of the Stockholm Syndrome in not quite as charming a fashion as we saw Patty Hearst when she emerged from hiding. If you are true to these characters and your story, then Hermione has a very long way to go... and even then... it\'s unlikely she will ever find a real sense of normalcy. The proposed pairing of SS/HG is actually a brilliant choice, because Snape has all the requisite characteristics to help her in her struggle from either the brink or... or actual madness itself.

this is very promising. I can\'t wait to see what you do next.

OMG, so dark and twisted...the idea that her skin grew onto the shackle was brilliant (and quite disturbing)...it\'s great to see Snape and Pomfrey so bothered by what they see...and yet during all of this, Snape still manages to be his weenie self with regards to Harry Potter and the other Griffindors.

Only 2 chapters and I am totally hooked, cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good, detailed work, you\'ve painted a great picture thus far and I look forward to your next update.

Ch 1-2 - very good start. I hope you update frequently. You\'ve written a good description of the Malfoy setting and her injuries, and I\'m glad that Harry and the others didn\'t go off on an immature rant, demanding to see Hermione immediately. Will this story eventually be a romance for Severus and Hermione? I hope someone told her parents she\'s alive. I am guessing the slave bracelet is strong because she consented to it under duress, perhaps with the hope that they would spare Ron\'s life.