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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Snape with bras.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m delighted to see that you\'re carrying on in the face of HBP, and that you\'ve so very realistically crafted this piece, even to the physical alterations due to lack of hormone production (caused by starvation and implied hysterectomy) including the loss of her breasts and menses. This is nicely, nicely done.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Dark and angsty!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. When are you going t oupdate? Please do it soon.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. It\'s nice to see dark done well. I look forward to updates.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umbridge? Ack! She\'s going to make life much more worse. . .
Anyway, another great chapter!
Anyway, another great chapter!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - I was ready to shove Harry out the door forever, but it\'s good he was there to SEE how much damage his \"good intentions\" are doing to her, and to see that Severus is getting better results than he is. Thanks for updating!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - PS - Severus should have witnesses like Albus and Harry and Poppy when Umbridge shows up - a few minutes with Hermione is all it should take to get Umbridge thrown out!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a mary sue, and not a horribly smutty pairing between Hermione and Snape. You did it with class and I enjoyed it! Awesome job. Also, the detail you use in your writing illustrates everything extremely vividly. I\'m sure the next installment will be fantastic. Kudos!
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I love the way you have written this! Superb! Brilliant! For the first time in ages, I am going to sign into my account and add this story to my favourites, or recommended list or whatever it\'s called... feel proud! Please update soon.