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for Into The Light

by Helbling

person missmaryrae
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I saw that coming. . . I like the Potter/Snape interaction.
person firewall
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol Poor Severus having to share with Harry. LOL Too funny.

Enjoy your holiday and we\'ll be here waiting for the rest of the story when you return.
person Janya
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I wish there were more to read.
person Katie K
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Several parts of that made me crack up laughing! It\'s still sad though... poor Hermione! And I know you said this fic is going on hiatus for a while, but I\'ll beg you to update soon regardless... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person Bambu
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great way to insert titillation into Hermione\'s recovery... very clever of you. I thought Harry\'s reaction was excellent. Shocked, startled and willing to understand that Snape did nothing but \'recieve\' Hermione\'s attentions. Laughing at Snape\'s expense and then a very credible apology just might make colleagues of the two wizards yet. Hermione has a very long way to go, but you\'ve done such an excellent job of maintaining the emotional/mental damage while slowly responding to courtesy. The slight contradiction and the crying jag were indeed excellent indicators of an ability to find mental stability and health at the end of the long, dark tunnel.
person Alyse
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\" Four of them, but she only had three openings. No matter for them, they had simply created another one with a blunt blade.\" At that, I shall die now...
[Dies]...... [Claps] BRAVA!!!! BRAVA!!!! Just one thing..DON\'T EVER MAKE US WAIT THAT LONG EVERY AGAIN!!!!!
person Fithos Lusec Wicos Vinosec
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know im not a writer but i sure as hell know talent when i see it. this is the first time i\'ve ever given a two thumbs up for a piece. i\'d give it a three thumbs up but as you can see i only have two hands^_^. keep it up and i want that new chapter....
person Katie K
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh poor Hermione! Please update soon! I seriously LOVE this story!
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the sotyr and i wish it was updated more often as i iwish to see more of how she will recover and how their relationship will go.
person luvssnape
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Very interesting. I like the way you have Severus retraining her to be an individual and not someone\'s servant. I am excited for an update.