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Wow! Chapter 9 is very different from the preceding chapters, in tone. I\'ll have to reread them later, when I have more time, but this chapter was humorous in spots, not nearly so dark. I was glad to see a new chapter. I was interested in how you would proceed. Still am.

Hmmm interesting ch 9... Not at all dark like the rest of your writing but I suppose you have to add some little bits of plot here and there.
I am fascinated by your writing and throughly enjoy your story so far.
Have a very happy birthday (I can remember my 21st well, I was living in the US at that stage too) and I hope Uni goes well for you.
Don\'t leave us hanging for to long for the next chapter. I know this is quite a lot to ask with real life happening and all that.
I liked the fact that Severus kicked the house elf down the stairs (ha ha ha) and that it landed on Harrys head, LOL!!! I still like your dark writings better but I suppose as you progress in your story that it will be getting lighter and lighter.
Oh well I feel that I have rambbled on enough and taken more time than you have... Keep up the good work, I look forward to ch 10!!!
Cheers, Sonia

You updated! I love you! :-) *hugs* love this chappy! very well written story. Please update soon!!

Ch 9 - wow.... you actually have me feeling sorry for Harry. Hmm, Severus is a Slytherin, so perhaps he can figure a way to get rid of Umbridge. I wish he hadn\'t kicked the poor house elf, especially since Hermione saw it and might now be afraid Severus will kick HER next. Can her body parts (uterus, etc.) be eventually repaired? Happy 21st birthday! I hope your move back to uni goes well.

Glad you are back and enjoyed your hot holiday. great chapter and will look forward to your update after youget settled at university again. BTW Happy Birthday.

Oh, I\'ve just finished through chapter nine. This is lovely, I can\'t wait for more!

I have reread this story three times and each time I read it it just keeps on getting better and better.
Please update soon, I know that it is annoying (to say the least) when all anyone says is \"UPDATE SOON\" however I can\'t help myself...
This is a great story and I hope you make it really long as I love long stories.
I love your writing, plot line, story, hell I love you.
Thanks for being yourself and bringing stuck an original story to light when every second SS/HG FF is a marriage law or some crap like that, not that their all that bad but you know what I mean.
I am writing my own SS/HG FF (first one) and it\'s about Hermione being lost in a muggle mental instituation and Severus is put on the case of finding her. I shall not give out any names and such here as I feel that is blantly promoting my story whilst this should be all about your story and the wonderful job you are doing so far.
If you have made it this far in reading this review I commend you, there is so much I want to say however my boys are annoying me and I have to get going.
Glad you had a great time in Egypt, wish I could have come along, LOL!!!
Cheers, Sonia.....

I am loving this story, it is in my favourites and I will be waiting with baited breath for an update.
Thanks for writing it. Cheers, Sonia

More please?

excellent!!!!!!!!!! ohhh i want more more more!!