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for The dirty little vampiress

by Mydirtymind

person your author
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes, well as I am a prepubescent, I\'m also a virgin. So, if the sex is shit, that\'s because I haven\'t had any myself. Thanks for the few postive remarks, you people. Excuse me while I go change my \"age.\"
person Xamphira
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I would like to congratulate this story on having the most hilarious review I\'ve ever read, in the entire of my life (I\'m 33 in case you feel the need to question that). Okay, that over:

I do love this drabble in its drabble-ness -- it\'s hot and your imagination is going some, and it works. **BUT** I\'d like to see you take a deep breath and have the whole thing go more slowly -- you\'d like it, I promise.
person The Voice of God
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sorry, but this story is shit. Post again when you learn to write. And doesn\'t AFF have a rule agaist children posting? It does. This brings up an interesting question, why are you, and obvious prepubesant, posting?
person Otis
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot, seriously. One of my biggest fantasies is of a woman being fucked helplessly, while her guy friends must watch and can do nothing. You hit it spot on. I really liked your other story too. Keep writing. You\'re wonderful.