AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

by chisox727

person bob
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that was an awesome scene! and anyone who would say otherwise should be shot...you really had no reason to worry about that chapter in my books!
I never really would think to see Hermione as a unsure type of person...I mean if you look at the house she is in then she should have courage.....being so unsure of yourself would be more likely from hufflepuff or summat like that....but I guess if the hat put Neville in the big G house than you can have a little insecurities *shrugs*
UPDATE SOON!
-bob
person dragon34
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love a good love story, can\'t wait to read more.
person dragon34
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, can\'t wait to read more.
person Gracie
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person SillyHarriet
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! misten is such an idiot

**i\'m on chapter 4**
person bob
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww!
I\'m glad you like the idea of the cake at least.....maybe next time I\'ll give you a nut bar or something....hehe
I really liked having Draco at least try to explain his feelings for Hermoine....I know when people have a wall put up to protect themselves that it\'s difficult to get rid of the walls and let the people in.....I guess when you have an almost sheltered life like Draco, then you\'re bound to be a little cold.
OOO! Draco\'s a virgin!!!! Well thats a new turn on things.....I really liked that....It was super awesome to the max!!!
BTW my nickname is bob, but I\'m not a guy.....I\'m a girl....I have no penis U____U;.....sadly....heh j/k
ok....please update soon....and have long chapters like last time....these chapters were awesome!!!!.....ummmm....how about I bribe you with.........heh INVADER ZIM!!!! (if you have no clue what this is....then I shall send you a pic of a dancing gir....you will laugh...he is awesome :D)
-bob
person twishy
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fabulous! write some more!
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alsome story can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Is really Malfoy in the bedroom with someone else?
person cat
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story- I like that everything hasn\'t happened all at once the minute they realized they could be attracted to each other. The anticipation is so bittersweet! But now you have me waiting (impatiently) to find out what the story is with those voices in Draco\'s bedroom. Can\'t wait for more!
person dragon34
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t help, but to think that it\'s Misten, and maybe Severus having sex in Draco\'s room.