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for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

by chisox727

person anon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent, I can\'t imagine anybody but Rowling writing the characters more truthfully, and completely. You are an incredibly gifted writer, and I hope you continue writing such wonderful fanfiction.
person Kristal
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story!!! if u can please email me when u update i would greatly appreciate it!!!
keep writing, im hooked! :)
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story, you\'ve really been able to capture the characters, and write very well, both in a literary sense and a technical sense.
person angel eyes
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter :)
person Angel Eyes
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!
person dragon34
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so hoping to see Draco kick his Fathers butt. Can\'t wait to read more.
person Kezz
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow great job! Please update soon.
Kezz..x.x.x.
person saytheya
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh! noo you need to add more chapters!! I love it. the story is going reallllly well so I hope you write more chapters soon!!!
person bob
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my! I thought that Malfoy Sr. would go all nuts on us for a sec there.....but he can do that later *evil smirk*
I wonder what Draco was getting....perhaps another present for Hermione?....or the bad buisness type thing....I\'m too tired to figure out what his plans are....I think it\'s time for a nap!!! YAY!!!
awesome chapter.....UPDATE SOON!!!
-bob
person dragon34
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your sex scene was good. Don\'t be nervous about writting them, and don\'t be nervous about not getting to graphic, sometimes when a person has to use their imagination, it makes the sex scene hotter.

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