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for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

by chisox727

person shelly
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! I\'m on chapter 12 right now and it\'s just so funny I had to stop and review. \"We\'re coming! Don\'t panic!\" \" Finite Incantum! Finite Incantum!\" Seriously, I\'m cracking up over here. So funny!!!!
person Avanell
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but Ron and Harry are really getting on my nerves. They need to be taught a lesson...more than one actually. First in friendship. And then there\'s Draco. Sigh. Please resolve some of these problems soon!
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person saytheya
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!! I read all your chapters, now I\'m just waiting for more updates..don\'t let this become one of the unended stories on my growing list of fanfics! it\'s too good for that.
person kurtcouper
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are bloody brilliant! The emotions and the fucking angst! I love my love stories with lots of angst. It just makes it so much better when they get together. I just can\'t help but be so drawn to this story for I act so much like Hermione. I secondguess everything and think I\'m never worth anything. It\'s just so gorgeous, I really can\'t explain. Everytime Draco seems to mess something up, he always finds a way to talk himself out of it. That gets to me. I\'m saying this as a character, not how you wrote it because I think it\'s so wonderful. All these characters are so round and lifelike. But especially Hermione. Misten is another great character. Kudos to everything and I wish that you continue the story. <3KC
person dragon34
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione just needs to pull Draco into an empty room, and talk to him, then kiss him senseless
person pettrum42
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one of the best authors I\'ve read, rivaling even Red Rover (a digimon writer). Your characters are worthy of Rowling herself, I am impressed. Now, please, write more!!! I need to know what happens!
person anon
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, but too short! I want to know more!!!
person angel eyes
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon! i LOVED the last chapter!
person Norah
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, did you even READ the books?

HAHAHA. So stupid. Like I was reading chapter six of this fic, and...Draco /showed/ his dark mark in 5TH YEAR.

and this Misten girl or whatever is just as stupid Mary-Sue.

I hope you like writing crappy fics!