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for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

by chisox727

person Stacy
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, great story, I loved how you had their relationship build up gradually, and that they weren\'t all jumping on each other first thing. good job.
person rangerbabe
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You have an amazing talent for writing! Keep it up!
person jess
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you keep continueing this story. Its so good and sad, and i want to know what happends next! <3
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20:

Please tell me that that is not all there is... Please, Please PLEASE update soon. I was crying and laughing and screaming (often at Hermione for being a complete and utter git)... but... This is brilliant update soon please!

Bek
person AZCatFan
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I certainly hope there is more...I am very disturbed by this UGLY turn of events and I would be *highly* disappointed if you did not update soon and resolve this. It was going along so well and then yuck. Your story is well-written, often touching and at times laugh-out-loud funny....but also agonizingly convoluted. Let\'s lose the insecure woe-is-me-Herminone and get to the POINT. Thanks and keep it coming :o)
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re incredible, please, write the next chapter(s)!
person shell
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I\'m a little fuzzy on \"the plan\" as far as Harry and Ron are concerned, but I\'m sure it\'ll be explained. I can\'t wait to see Draco and Hermione at least talk about their problems. Keep going, it\'s great.
person lunastar
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a very well written and very good story.
I hope you can update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, although I think that more could have been said about Draco\'s behavior. I love your style, and the way you\'re able to write the varying moods of the characters so subtly.
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon! You\'ve written this so well that I can\'t hardly believe it! And not only is it written well, but it\'s realistic! You play the emotions that Hermione sturggles with and the emotions that Draco tries to resist perfectly! And for an adult fan fiction, I was very surprised to see not just sex in every chapter but an actual, well thought out story! Please update soon!

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