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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Where's your update??? OMG! It's a very goof FF, you just can't leave it like that!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such a wonderful job! update soon! i am dying to know what happens!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the depth of your characters is fantastic and i am truly enjoying the story. i haven\'t finished yet but i cant wait to see where the hermione-draco thing goes.
it really seems as if your characters are real people with real emotions, which is really great.
it really seems as if your characters are real people with real emotions, which is really great.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story on ficitonalley.org and i loved it. i was so excited to find it here and to be able to read more of the story. This is a great story and I hope you update again soon.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please put something! I need it! I\'m going to die if you dont put something
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! I sit here and read this story all day and every other chapter ending I could handle you leaving it at but Noooo you have to go and stop here! Great story, I am currently trying not to throw a fit until I get my way and you update this story now.
Like I said before, I found this story today and began reading it around noon, it is now 1:22 am and I just finished it. How could you be so mean as to leave me hanging like that? What\'s going to happen? This better be a happily ever after story or I\'ll cry!
Anyway, as for the story... You kept having Hermione up in her room crying her eyes out, or in the library crying her eyes out, or in the house common room crying her eyes out, she had no back bone, she kept breaking down and crying. I admit that that is exactly what I would have done in her situation but she ain\'t me. Hermione has gumption and guts and backbone, and courage. Afterall she had continually put herself in seriously dangerous situations.
But other that her crying a lot and a lot of suspicion towards Misten I thought the story was great, please continue and I cannot wait till you update, I will be checking daily. Hope to leave another review soon! -Your New Loyal Fan
Like I said before, I found this story today and began reading it around noon, it is now 1:22 am and I just finished it. How could you be so mean as to leave me hanging like that? What\'s going to happen? This better be a happily ever after story or I\'ll cry!
Anyway, as for the story... You kept having Hermione up in her room crying her eyes out, or in the library crying her eyes out, or in the house common room crying her eyes out, she had no back bone, she kept breaking down and crying. I admit that that is exactly what I would have done in her situation but she ain\'t me. Hermione has gumption and guts and backbone, and courage. Afterall she had continually put herself in seriously dangerous situations.
But other that her crying a lot and a lot of suspicion towards Misten I thought the story was great, please continue and I cannot wait till you update, I will be checking daily. Hope to leave another review soon! -Your New Loyal Fan
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another four chapters in a wonderful series! The sex scenes are nicely done, neither being too graphic thus taking away from the story, nor being too lacking and unbelievable. I really like how the side characters (Ron, Harry, Misten) have their own side plot lines, it makes them feel more like real people than plot devices. Knowing that their lives continue while the main plot thickens really enriches the story.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24:
OOooh!!!!!!! Cliffhangers are the most evil and vile things in the world!! (I should know, I\'ve written enough of them, lol). This was BRILLIANT! Please update soon, I\'m on tenterhooks waiting and waiting to see what happens next...
Though I\'m curious about Misten (still... something just doesn\'t sit right with her...), and I\'m definitely curious as to what it was McGonagall passed to Hermione... Someone please bitch slap Lucius!
Keep up the great work!
Bek
OOooh!!!!!!! Cliffhangers are the most evil and vile things in the world!! (I should know, I\'ve written enough of them, lol). This was BRILLIANT! Please update soon, I\'m on tenterhooks waiting and waiting to see what happens next...
Though I\'m curious about Misten (still... something just doesn\'t sit right with her...), and I\'m definitely curious as to what it was McGonagall passed to Hermione... Someone please bitch slap Lucius!
Keep up the great work!
Bek
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, great story, I loved how you had their relationship build up gradually, and that they weren\'t all sumping on each other first thing. good job.