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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Yeah - great, as far as it goes but this was still quite a short chapter I felt. Maybe it is just my impatience to find out what the Mer-people could possibly have to offer Hermione that would provide her with any dilemma at all. So far, it seems pretty clear cut - whatever life she\'s dreamed of on land versus a life of splashing about in Hogwarts lake. No contest there. Now, if she were to fall in love with a Merman, that might be something to stay a Mermaid for! I am really enjoying this though and I like your writing style. Keep up the good work.

Honey, I\'m so sorry I upset you with the review. I thought your story was worth the time to make a comment. I wanted answers for the why of the reaction, or nonreaction as it were, and was actually trying to be helpful..

Stormi,

A great beginning. I am looking forward to reading more. Longer chapters are nice but sometimes you have said what needs to be said and if it happens to be short, oh well. Keep up the good work and I hope that your muse doesn\'t go AWOL.

i have a suggestion that has prob been said before, please try for longer chapters, then ppl are more forgiving if you don\'t update as often. but your story is awesome so far.

Weird - and utterly fascinating. I want to read more.

This situation seems like a bit of rape to me. She was not approached about this scenario or given a choice about her fate. When she WAS forced into an altered state, she was left to her own devices. Now (I think, am not really sure-- you didn\'t go into it in detail) she seems to have a compulsion not to share her experience or feelings about it with her best friends- and she seems to have NO feelings about that. Her isolation doesn\'t explain why she wouldn\'t be in a state of panic at what\'s being thrown at her. Why doesn\'t she have any doubts or negative feelings about this? She seems to be floating around in denial that something bad has happened to her. And it IS bad. She was forced into another world with no explaination, no warning, no reason as far as she knows. I\'m interested in seeing if you can address these issues because this could be a really good story.

u need 2 make chapters longer

Love it love it love it! Please continue! This is the first hermione as a mermaid fic I\'ve read and its a breathe of fresh air! Thanks so much and keep writing please!

I like you story a lot. It is very orginal, and i can\'t wait for Snape to come in.