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for Lies

by RYoung

person thrnbrooke
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to go on!!!! I need chapter 3!!!! Gotta know what happens next? Do they get together?
person Eowynselixure
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES YES it should go on!!!!!!!!!!!

Go 4 it! Little confused as to what the light spell does tho? and the begginning of the chapter.

*Eowyns elixure
person ladynight
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! Keep it going...Please?
person ku
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg keep going!
longer chapters.. muah! ^~
person LPhoenix
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is very logical, and in charater from draco\'s point of view... very nice...
person zentiis
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!
please please please continue! it\'s too scrumptious not to!
person Cenn
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

Please continue this story! I love the thought of Draco being all Harry focused... Maybe another shower scene..maybe Harry catching Draco in the act of wanking... Just write it and I\'m sure I\'ll love it!

Greetz,
Cenn
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Surely Draco could at least try to win the other! Want chapter 2 please!
person Crazy Devilish Angel
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definitly continue :) else poor draco will be so sad :P xx Angel
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it i think you should have more chapters