rate_review Reviews

yum! this is great

i love your story i want more don't end it so soon. You writer with life in the story not just sex like other people do

''' Damn.'''' What could i say but that was really good.

I want Harry love him back

I do hope that this isn'r over, I really enjoyed that! Keep up the good work!
~Toodles

Oh I need chapter 7! I'm surprised that no one came to check on Harry.

Wow! That was great!

I wonder..... hmmm. Words spoken to protect himself or the way he thinks he feels. Can Draco convince him otherwise? I can\'t wait for chapter 6!

wooah I seriously love your fic. It\'s so hot but I\'m upset that they can\'t have an actual relationship

The piece does sit well as a stand-alone, should you wish to keep it this way. You\'ve written Malfoy nicely, as both the proud Slytherin Prince and the scared, confused little boy we all know he is. However, if you want to continue it, it would be interesting to read a few vignettes from Draco\'s point of view as his \"crush\" escalates beyond his control. I could just imagine the angst, if this first bit is any indication. Whether or not Harry ultimately shares Draco\'s little fantasies is up to you. I\'ve always liked stories where one character wants and the other is completely oblivious, adding to the frustration of the first. Unfortunately, there aren\'t enough stories that put big bad Draco in the role of the wanting lost soul....at least well written ones:) I\'ll keep and eye out to see what you do with this. Either way, it was a good read. Thanks for posting.